Epic Zigfield:

*Zig's story expanded with an emphasis on micro detail. Incomplete early experiment in technique of zeroing in on minute, unimportant details, while key actions taking place over many hours are collapsed into a casual reference. Failure of experiment originally lay in the loss of the immediacy and brevity of the lyrical original, however, I'm now also considering that it might have as well needed the essential bits to be focused on particular experiences and ideas and not simply be yet more examples of the experiment.